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    Tazer
    That Evil, Yellow Bastiche

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    Yo.

    ok, lets see: yur grammar need some work, as a few sentences dont flow with one another, but just seem to stop w/o it being a change in thought, and some are a bit repetitive in which words ya use (try for using some synonyms.) also, it reads *just a bit* too technical to me, but if yur going to be explaning something I guess that cant really be helped. lastly, yur last paragraph just ends, and then U give out the more conscise "good & bad" for the game, but I think U couldve led into that a bit better rather than being so abrupt; pad it a little.

    all in all, I'll give it a 7.8 Warriors out of 10......





    Tazer

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  • Mr.Dragon01
    Ghost of the Flashchat

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    So what do you think, Tazer?

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  • Tazer
    That Evil, Yellow Bastiche

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    Yo.

    YAY!! I R BEING HELPING!!






    Tazer

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  • Mr.Dragon01
    Ghost of the Flashchat

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    On that note, thank you Tazer for challenging me to write a review on a game that has no story. It helped me think of other things I could talk about in a game such as this and I am thankful for it. As promised Resistance will be next.

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  • Mr.Dragon01
    Ghost of the Flashchat

  • Dragon's Travels with Lumines: Electronic Symphony!

    Hey guys! I'm back and I've returned with a review! Please read it and tell me what you think!

    http://marvelousiggy.wordpress.com/2...hony/#more-683
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