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Old 09-10-2009, 10:17 PM   #2
Spectre216
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first off- use the power of the period because that whole first sentence is a run on and is exhaustive and confusing to read.

secondly- It still covers a decent chunk of his face so i could see how most people may not get, plus i'm sure most of coast city's residents don't know Hal Jordan.
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