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  • An idea I had

    I have neither the patience nor attention span to actually sit down and write a story beginning to end, but, like most of us, I have all kinds of ideas. (Most of my ideas involve GL's that don't actually exist in the comic.)

    Here is a quick summary of one story idea I had:

    There is a female Green Lantern somewhere in the universe (doesn't really matter where) She's pregnant, expecting a son. At some point in battle, her stomach get blasted off (or something less gruesome), but the point is she survives and the baby doesn't. Her extreme grief gives her the will power necessary to basically undo the accident (recreate the child without the Guardian's knowledge somehow). She proceeds to deliver and raise the child to adolescence.

    The tragic ending is she is confronted with a danger that threatens her entire world, and requires every ounce of will power she has to prevent. Unable to stop the cataclysmic event she looks around helplessly meeting eyes with her son. He tells her to "Do it". She closes her eyes and pours even more will power into it until she has nothing left, eventually stopping the disastrous event. When she opens her eyes her son is gone. Turns out he was just an elaborate construct all along and she couldn't keep him alive while stopping the threat.

    fini

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    chapter 1 chain story

    FRAME 1
    (sector 1000) GL on planet in forrest or jungle just landed as if running from attack (in GL gear )

    GL (name: Stef'ose) She is pregant and holding her stomach screaming in pain

    We see Despostilles leaving her womb

    FRAME 2
    Stef'ose: [screaming] "OH God noooooooo......"
    (The Book of Oa)
    For some the loss is all they have
    It is what fuels their will power
    this is a story of that loss

    Stef'ose holds a dead baby with yellow dripping out of its nostrils and cries

    FRAME 3
    Stef'ose standing over the grave of her son
    "I Can Fix This"

    (Book of Oa) Those are dread words for any Green Lantern to speak
    we see some kind of tip of the hat to Emerald Twilight in the clouds very vauge cloud formations of maybe Parallax's hands with all the rings

    Chain this....... countinue the story
    My Ketogenic Journey

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    • #3
      Would be interesting and quite emotional, from a readers unsuspecting view point.
      Do good. Be well. Make happy.

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      • #4
        This is the part that I'm no good at. If anybody else wants to flesh this out, I would love to see where it goes, but the best I can offer is what's posted above.

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        • #5
          I may give it a go after I complete my GL fan fiction that was inspired by a conversation I had with Andrew. That is, if no one else has taken a shot at it before that... of course... it looks like Jim may have an idea for something about it, wanting a chain story version of it.
          Do good. Be well. Make happy.

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          • #6
            FRAME 1
            (sector 1000) GL on planet in forrest or jungle just landed as if running from attack (in GL gear )

            GL (name: Stef'ose) She is pregant and holding her stomach screaming in pain

            We see Despostilles leaving her womb

            FRAME 2
            Stef'ose: [screaming] "OH God noooooooo......"
            (The Book of Oa)
            For some the loss is all they have
            It is what fuels their will power
            this is a story of that loss

            Stef'ose holds a dead baby with yellow dripping out of its nostrils and cries

            FRAME 3
            Stef'ose standing over the grave of her son
            "I Can Fix This"

            (Book of Oa) Those are dread words for any Green Lantern to speak

            we see some kind of tip of the hat to Emerald Twilight in the clouds very vauge cloud formations of maybe Parallax's hands with all the rings

            FRAME 4
            Ste'fose: "I can make this right, the ring can do anything I tell it"

            Green smoke rises out of the grave and swirls around her feet

            FRAME 5
            Ste'fose in the middle of a giant emerald blast that fills most of the Frame, know holds a glowing green healthy baby boy. "My son."

            FRAME 6

            Planet Zaklow: Ste'fose is saving people from a earthquake.

            People: "Look it's Green Lantern!, We're Saved!"

            More later if you want to continue this feel free I will add after you
            My Ketogenic Journey

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            • #7
              Very interesting. Look forward to more!

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              • #8
                Niiiiice.. Who would pencil that story? I'd definitely buy it!

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by genesistorm View Post
                  Niiiiice.. Who would pencil that story? I'd definitely buy it!
                  only EVS for my stories! I'll be back to this soon ....
                  My Ketogenic Journey

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by GLJIMT View Post
                    only EVS for my stories! I'll be back to this soon ....
                    Oh. You don't think small, do ya?

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by genesistorm View Post
                      Oh. You don't think small, do ya?
                      I tell you what I would let Gene Ha or Perez do it also
                      My Ketogenic Journey

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by GLJIMT View Post
                        I tell you what I would let Gene Ha or Perez do it also
                        Good choices.. how about Quitely? you like Quitely?

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