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Old 06-30-2011, 07:12 AM   #51
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Nope, already had the word black in at least two chapters and I don't wanna play the word out too quick LOL

There was actually three I was looking at and decided on one in particular....

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Old 07-02-2011, 05:30 AM   #52
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HA!HA!HA!HA!

well I'll wait for the next chapter..

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Old 07-31-2011, 03:46 PM   #53
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It's taking a little longer than expected but I'm trying not to rush the ending. After doing some research on different demons and spirits I think most of you will like what I've come up with! I'm about 70% done with the next chapter, hopefully I can finish it tonight after I paint my kitchen....

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Old 08-11-2011, 05:41 AM   #54
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Exclamation Chapter 8 pt 1

Dark Lantern Chapter 5: Seek and Destroy

“My name is Kyle Rayner. I’m in control.” thought Kyle picking himself up off the ground in an alley.

“The nightmares… I finally figured out where they were coming from. Oblivion. When I first encountered the big O, he was several loose constructs and nightmares built up into a monster. I thought all this time that he was my creation. He’s some sort of demon that jumped inside of me when I was a boy. He’s been watching my life go by and tried escaping at least a dozen or so times. Now he’s trying to take my body….” Kyle thought walking home.

“Now he’s trying to take my body. What do you think, Alan? Do you still have Dr. Fate or maybe even Blue Devil’s number?” Kyle asked Alan flying through Gotham the next morning.

“The Starheart energies have mystical properties, Kyle. If you could somehow use them to draw him out of your body….” Alan started to say.

“…I’d let some sort of demon from Hell run wild on Earth. I don’t think I can purge him and contain him on my own. I still wouldn’t have a clue what to do with him even after he’s contained. He’s not some loser in a Halloween costume, he’s an “it.” the Dark Lantern responded.

“Have you ever willed yourself into your ring?” Alan asked flying over Wayne Tower.

“Once or twice yeah, why?” Kyle asked.

“If you can will yourself into your ring, and Parallax into your Power Battery, you could do the same with Oblivion.” Alan replied.

Kyle rolled his eyes….

“Why didn’t I think of that…?” Kyle responded with a flicker of red in his eye.

Later….

“HEY?!? What am I doing?” Kyle thought for a moment before realizing he had no control over his own body.
He watched as his hands brought his personal Power Battery down hard on the edge of a rooftop several times. Inside of it the Parallax entity watched on like a snake behind a glass wall that was cracking slightly.

“This ends NOW!” Kyle thought as large amounts of green energy spewed from the Dark Lanterns eyes and mouth.

The Power Battery dropped. Kyle continued to glow and spew energy from his eyes and then began floating. With one large push of energy and willpower Kyle fell to the rooftop smoking. Oblivion stood roughly fifteen feet away, picking up the Battery.

“Do you have any idea what you have just given me, mortal?” Oblivion asked dropping the Battery back down.

“Flesh and blood, energy….” Oblivion began.

“…a tangible body to beat on!” Kyle screamed as he blasted the twisted villain with green energy from his eyes as he picked himself up.

The Dark Lantern created constructs of Jason [from Friday the 13th] and Freddy [from Nightmare on Elm Street], who began slashing at the monster with a machete blade and a clawed hand respectively. Oblivion quickly grabbed Jason by the neck and after cracking it in his hand the construct dissipated.

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Old 08-11-2011, 05:48 AM   #55
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*boo too short boo* lol

anyway so "big O" is going after "big P" huh.............. i like where this is going
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Still trying to post the rest of it, give it time LOL

EDIT: BTW, there was more added to the original post.

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d@mn it i posted to fast then lol my bad
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Old 08-11-2011, 05:53 AM   #57
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pt 2


“Your constructs can’t hurt me, boy!” Oblivion screamed as Kyle went airborne.

“I know what you are, Oblivion. Where did you come from? What do you want from me?!?” Kyle screamed as the demon drew closer.

“I am one of the many Oneiroi. I have gone by many names over the centuries trying to escape the nightmare world of mortals.” Oblivion said catching up to the hero, then getting blasted in the face with eye beams.

“Why did you possess me when I was just a kid?” Kyle continued before getting rammed into the side of a skyscraper.

“I sensed that you would one day possess POWER.” Oblivion said as Kyle recovered and began flying back towards his battery lying on the roof.

“Power that I WANTED… power that I NEEDED to escape the nightmare dimension that has been my home for centuries. And now I….” Oblivion began as Kyle reached his battery.

“…talk too much!” the Dark Lantern said drawing the demon toward the battery.

The horned behemoth fought with everything he had. He shot energy towards Kyle. His feet were stretching toward the ring port when suddenly….

PARALLAX reached out of the battery and grasped Oblivion in his large yellow hand and pulled him into the battery.

Later….

“I can’t believe that worked. And Parallax…. Oblivion probably looked like a giant fruit roll up just outside of my….” Kyle thought flying through the roof of his Brooklyn apartment noticing something large in the corner of his home.

“You are to release your power battery to me at once, Kyle Rayner of Earth. You are no longer a member of the Green Lantern Corps….” said an unknown Alpha Lantern lighting up and taking a defensive stance.

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Old 08-11-2011, 05:54 AM   #58
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*after re-reading the 1st part*


HOLY SH!T IT'S ON NOW MOTHERF@CKERS
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Old 08-11-2011, 05:57 AM   #59
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HOLY SH!T IT'S ON NOW MOTHERF@CKERS
The second part is where it's at LOL

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*after reading part 2*


F@CK YEAH THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT, even a demon knew Kyle was gonna be great one day (suck it Hal fans )
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Old 08-11-2011, 06:05 AM   #61
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Not bad KL!

so who's going to draw the comic???
we want it NOW!!!

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Old 08-11-2011, 11:18 AM   #62
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nice finish to the oblivion story KL.
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Old 08-28-2011, 01:25 AM   #63
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Next up Kyle will deal with the Alpha Lantern and my original villain Rewind. Oh, and we'll see how Jasmine feels about the night with the Oblivion possessed Kyle.

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Old 10-04-2011, 04:24 AM   #64
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I'm just getting into the better part of this next chapter but it's coming along. Been working on some stuff with Goat Lantern, and I'm currently running a LoSH RP on another site....

If this is my last chapter for awhile I'd like to leave it on a high note!

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Old 11-29-2011, 12:24 AM   #65
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IDK about you guys but writing a 9 part story just sounds strange, I'm gonna shoot for 10 chapters if I can just get this next one in the can. It almost doesn't even make sense now with the DCnU, my next fanfic will have to work within the new universe....

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ok... looking forward to the next 2 chapters!!

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Old 04-21-2012, 01:17 AM   #67
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After my laptop crashed I lost what I had for the next chapter, admittedly though it was only three paragraphs and a little dialogue. When I get another computer or get my Toshiba out of the shop I'll get back to work on finishing off this series. I might use my idea of Sinestro creating a team of Dark Lanterns to operate within the bigger Corps in the DCnU in my next fanfic if the idea doesn't work for an rpg....

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Old 12-21-2013, 05:04 PM   #68
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I've finally got myself an idea to write for Kyle to fix him in the New52. I'll be starting with him as the White Lantern he is currently and go from there to bring him back to the Green Lantern Corps exclusively...

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I think I might just spin a new52 take on my Dark Lantern Kyle and take out the whole killing of Sinestro part instead of just writing Kyle as a standard GL again. Need more of a challenge and I like reinventing heroes... Still have to write off his exit as a WL, but I think I'll put a spin on the Starheart being sentient and feeding on the green ring's energy also absorbed into Kyle. Try and do some cosmic bits before taking him back to Earth, have him run in with a few old favorites. Might even just make him purely Starheart powered and kick him out of the Corps for some bogus reason...

If I could keep anything from the pre-New52 Kyle era when he gets back to Earth what should I keep and possibly venture into storywise...

1.) His friendship with Roy Harper
2.) A brief time in the JL [like a couple missions with them tops]
3.) The apartment above Radu's OR a job drawing a cartoon strip at FEAST magazine
4.) A relationship with a new52 Donna Troy [pssssst, she won't know she's an Amazon...]

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^^^New updated design...

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Old 08-26-2014, 10:03 PM   #73
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“You are to release your power battery to me at once, Kyle Rayner of Earth. You are no longer a member of the Green Lantern Corps….” said an unknown Alpha Lantern lighting up and taking a defensive stance.
And that's all? I'm enjoying your New52 fanfic, no doubt, but here you had a very good story in progress too. It's a pity you didn´t write more chapters after that Alpha Lantern come.

I think the Sinestro part has been the one I've liked the most, but the return of Oblivion was very interesting too, getting back many details from the Ron Marz's run (as you're also doing in your new fanfic). Maybe, I´d like more development of the Oblivion's menace before its conclusion, but it's been OK anyway.

Nice work!
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Thanks! I really enjoyed this series a great deal but just didn't want to keep developing the story in that era. Smaller details always seem to get away from writers in favor of using a shock and awe moment with no real build up.

The story actually came to me when I started a thread years ago about 'dating the daughter of somebody who murdered your mom' and how even with suspension of disbelief it was just too much. I think it was around Brightest Day and they just had Sinestro and Kyle spar for five seconds [when Kyle asked for Sinestro's help... because I guess Hal and Guy were busy...]and then afterwards... nothing. Sinestro's death sentence? Completely forgotten.

I had a couple creepy signatures for the Oblivion arc I wish I'd saved.

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